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Тимофей Милорадович
31 авг. 2021 г.
Что происходит, и что нужно делать, когда вы пишете эссе на ЕГЭ, IELTS или на любом другом экзамене
Что происходит, и что нужно делать, когда вы пишете эссе на ЕГЭ, IELTS или на любом другом экзамене
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Примеры эссе по английскому языку, пригодные для ЕГЭ:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Write at least 250 words
How to answer this task?
1. Introduce the topic.
Just restate your topic and write that the given problem has causes and can be solved.
2. Write the main causes and explain them.
In the second paragraph, describe each cause of the given problem, shortly explaining it.
3. Suggest solutions
Propose some solutions and say why they should work.
4. Write a short conclusion.
Briefly summarize what you have written.
Model answer
Nowadays, there are a lot of students who work while studying. Although this tendency may lead to negative results, the number of young people who sacrifice education for work is growing. I believe that this problem has certain causes and can be solved by taking special measures.
It is apparent that most of the students who work have many financial expenses to meet. One common cause is the high cost of education. As many colleges and universities set high tuition fees, some families cannot fully afford higher education for their children. Consequently, these students have to work to pay university and college fees. The other cause is living expenses. Many students study away from their hometown and have to pay for accommodation, food, entertainment etc. As it is often hard to cover these expenses, students are forced to earn money to afford their living. I think that the problem of students working during their studies results in lower quality of education and has no benefits at all. Thus, it should be solved on the governmental level.
I can suggest two possible solutions to this problem. Firstly, the government could make higher education free. For instance, this result can be achieved by financing educational establishments from the country’s budget. Not only will it make universities and colleges accessible for everyone, but it will also reduce the number of working students. The second solution is promoting unpaid e-learning. Such form of distance education doesn’t require a lot of resources to be maintained. What’s more, students don’t have to leave their homes and can plan their schedules the way they prefer.
In conclusion, I believe that mainly lack of financial resources causes students to work, but this problem can be solved by lowering the amount of financial expenses students have to meet.
(298 words)
Write an answer using the following structure:
Introduction Paraphrase the topic and briefly give your opinion. Body Develop your point, giving reasons and supporting them with appropriate examples. Write at least 2 and no more than 5 paragraphs. Conclusion Sum up what you have written and give your final thoughts on the problem. They should not differ from those in the introduction.
Пример Эссе по английскому языку от British Council
Information will soon be so easy to find on the internet that people will not need to remember anything. Do you agree?
Nowadays all the information we could ever need is available online and some people say that means the end of having to learn anything. It is true that these days everything you want to know is a few clicks away as long as you have internet access. However, not everyone has working internet all the time, for example in certain buildings or remote locations, so we do need to be able to remember information. Moreover, it takes time to look up everything you need to know online, whereas remembering something is immediate. The human memory is a much more efficient system. Another problem is the quality of the information online. How do we know if it is accurate or reliable? We need to think about other facts we know and remember how to compare information from different websites. Knowing (and remembering) how to find certain information will be more important than knowing the information itself. Finally, the internet is a good tool but it is not a useful replacement for our brains. If we did not remember anything, we would all spend even more time on our phones and computers than we already do, which is not good for society. In conclusion, the internet offers us many things but it is still important to use our knowledge and memories. We need our memories to function without the internet and we also need to know how to use the internet properly.
Советы для написания эссе по английскому от British Council, органа, который и участвует в формировании заданий по английскому языку для экзаменов в англоязычном мире, откуда и приходят оригиналы заданий для русскоязычных школ тоже.
Read the question carefully. Respond to all ideas in it or all parts of it.
Plan your ideas first and then choose the best ones.
Introduce your essay by restating the question in your own words.
Show understanding of both sides of the argument.
Use linking words to connect your ideas.
Draw your conclusion from the main ideas in your essay. Don't introduce new ideas at the end.